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Opinion Essay Writing – Gene-Editing Essay

Opinion Essay Writing – Gene-Editing Essay

I wanted to help you out with your essay project, so here I am going to outline your process and the structure your essay will take.

The Process:

  1. The research is important.  The Newsela articles will give you some information on the issue of Gene-Editing.  I’ve added some articles to help you understand the history of eugenics, which is what we called ‘playing with genetics’ before gene-editing at the DNA level was possible.  You read one set or both sets of articles to get an understanding of the issue.
  2. As you read, you will ask yourself the foundational question: Will this technology be good for society or bad for society?  Should we continue to explore it?  Should that exploration include home gene-editing kits that anyone can use?  Should there be restrictions on the kinds of genes we want edited?  Should we limit this technology in any way?
  3. When you have an opinion on the topic, you are ready to gather your supporting evidence from the Newsela articles.  Let’s say you think gene-editing is awesome and everyone should be allowed to play with it, you start to gather facts and ideas from the articles to support your ideas.
  4. You may decide that you have several reasons for your opinion (I’m just pretending here, so please excuse my humour).  a) It can help eliminate disease. b) People will get the designer babies they really want.  d) If people want to create viruses in their basements, that’s their business.
  5. Once you have your a) opinion b) reasons, you are c) READY!

The Structure:  Introductory paragraph, body paragraphs, and concluding paragraph.

  1. Introduction or Paragraph 1: You introduce the topic of Gene-Editing.  Your first sentence should draw your reader in.  The paragraph should clearly outline what Gene-Editing is.  Use the technical terminology you learned when reading the Newsela articles.  This paragraph is also where you tell the reader that you are going to give your opinion and back it with reasons.  And you actually state your opinion clearly; that’s the thesis.  I do/do not think gene-editing is a good idea.  I think gene-editing is a good idea but only if . . . . . (and so on).  You can use better wording/vocabulary than this, but you get the idea.
  2. Paragraph 2: This is reason #1 (see above).  The first sentence is a topic sentence.  For example: “We have many deadly diseases in our world and having the ability to eliminate them would be beneficial to all.” After you state your reason, you need to use the evidence you got from the Newsela articles as support for your reasoning.  Was there evidence showing how the tech can be used safely to eliminate disease?  Use it here.  Write a few sentences that contain facts to support your idea.  That’s why we read the articles.
  3. Paragraph 3: This is reason #2 (see above).  Topic sentence goes first.  Then supporting evidence makes up the next few sentences in the paragraph.
  4. Paragraph 4: This is reason #3 (see above).  Again, you have your topic/reason for your opinion as your topic sentence.  Then your supporting evidence.
  5. Paragraph 5: In this paragraph, you conclude.  You remind your reader of the topic and your opinion.  You restate your opinion clearly.  Try to change the wording of your thesis but make sure you say it clearly.  “Gene-editing will be a positive addition to our medical and scientific technology.”  Most opinion essays have a “Call to Action.”  That means you ask your reader to do something, consider something, change some behaviour, or just think about something.   For example: “Let’s speak out in favour . . . . ” “Let’s encourage . . . . ” “You can write your MP about . . . . ”  

If you only have 2 good reasons, that’s fine!  If you have more than 3, that’s fine too.  Create another body paragraph.  An opinion essay usually just explore one side of an issue.  You want one clear opinion.  If you believe that gene-editing is a good thing but there should be restrictions, you can explain the restrictions you think are necessary and how they will help to make gene-editing a good thing.

I truly hope this was helpful.  Please don’t hesitate to ask for additional help.  That’s what I am here for.

 

Writing for WEEK FIVE!

Writing for WEEK FIVE!

This week, our writing prompt is a video!  I’m going to ask you to watch the video (which will be easy because it’s so good), write a response to all the questions, and send it to me in a Word Online Document OR write a blogpost about it.  Blogposts would be fun because then you can discuss your favourite parts with others.

Make sure your written response is in sentences and paragraphs.  Please answer at least 2 of the questions in your response!  Each answer would take about a paragraph (5 sentences).  Reread your writing – always – to check for clarity (Are my ideas stated clearly?) and correctness (Did I use correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar?).  

 

The Questions!

  1. Why are shared experiences important?  Use examples from the video and your own experience.
  2. Choose one or two of these improvisational scenes (jokes/presentations) and tell how YOU would feel if you present but not part of the improvisational team.  How would you react if you found out you were filmed?  Use specific details from the video in your explanation.
  3. Which improvisational scene was your favourite?  Why? Use examples from the video to explain your reasoning.
  4. Offer YOUR idea for the next funny and absurd improvisational scene?  This is a chance to be completely creative and ABSURD!  Remember to describe it completely: Who would present?  How many people?  What would they do?  Where would they do it?  
  5. What is the value in the absurd?  Why do people need a little ABSURDITY in their lives?

 

ABSURD means:

adjective

– utterly or obviously senseless, illogical, or untrue; contrary to all reason or common sense; laughably foolish or false:an absurd explanation.

noun

– the quality or condition of existing in a meaningless and irrational world.
As always, you are free to use a writing prompt from previous weeks OR you can write on a topic of your choice.
Writing Prompts: Week FOUR!

Writing Prompts: Week FOUR!

Are you ready for WEEK FOUR?  I am!  I’m excited to read more of your amazing writing, Grades 7 and 8!  You have shown great creativity in your blogging in the past few weeks.

I would like you to remember that writing is both an art and a skill.  As artists, you are free to create, use your own voice, develop your own style, and show readers your unique thoughts and ways of expressing!  As a skill, you need to remember to follow the rules of writing:

  • use correct spelling
  • use punctuation correctly
  • use left alignment and paragraphs correctly (Grade 8 is expected to use paragraphing correctly with dialogue as well)
  • reread your writing to check for clarity and for errors
  • make corrections using what you know about sentence structures, spelling, punctuation

FOR GRADE 8 Students:

I am so excited about this week’s prompts because in addition to the four prompts I’m providing below, I’m going to give you a link to over 1000  Writing prompts that may inspire you to write an ESSAY!

Some students have asked for ESSAY PROMPTS!  Well, here they are:

NY Times Learning Network Writing Prompts

Remember that an essay has a ‘thesis statement’ or a statement in which you clearly state your opinion OR the main focus of the essay.

Remember that an essay has a:

  • introduction (thesis is usually in the introduction)
  •  body paragraphs to support your thesis: each paragraph is on a separate topic of support
  • concluding paragraph (includes a restatement of your thesis in different words AND a call to action)

Grade 7 students are welcome to write an opinion piece in response to the above prompts, however they are not expected to use the formal opinion piece structure.

For all students!

Writing Prompt #1

 

Writing Prompt #2

 

Writing Prompt #3

 

Writing Prompt #4

Happy WRITING!  I can’t wait to read your blogs.

Well Aren’t YOU Punny!

Well Aren’t YOU Punny!

As promised, I’m creating a blogpost that you can comment on with your FAVOURITE PUNS!

What’s a pun, you ask?  Simple.

Puns are a type of figurative language that are
often, but not always, humorous. A pun uses
words that have two or more meanings in order to
create an alternate interpretation. 

For example:

Right!  So you see what I mean?  Positive has a ‘double meaning’ here.  It relates to the positive charge that a battery has and the positive feeling people get. So, it’s funny, right?  Well, sort of.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here’s another example:

What kind of cats like to go bowling?

Alley cats.

 

OK, you didn’t like that one?  How about this one, eh?

If you didn’t get this one, maybe you aren’t aware of the fact that the mushroom is a member of the FUNGUS species.  ‘Fungi’ is the singular form of the word ‘fungus.’  So, the mushroom is actually a fungi.  But he’s also inferring that he’s a FUN GUY!  Right?  Get it, get it, huh?

OK, there’s a reason they say that puns are the lowest form of humour.  They’re DAD humour.  They’re Uncle Fred humour!  Maybe we groan, but really, inside, we’re laughing. (Maybe.)

So, here’s your chance to make us all laugh or groan or both!  Put your favourite pun in the comments or make your own blogpost with your favourite puns!

 

P. S. If your pun is in the form of an image, you’ll have to use your own blogpost to share it as you can’t upload an image into a comment box.

Week Three – Writing Prompts

Week Three – Writing Prompts

I am LOVING your blogposts, ladies and gentlemen!  You are amazing writers, and I applaud every single one of you who has attempted a blogpost in the past two weeks.

I’m doing my best to give you feedback on your blogs.  If I haven’t responded yet, I promise that I will!

Here are our writing prompts for this week.

Remember:

  • You can write whatever you want!  You don’t have to use the prompt.
  • I’m providing lots of choices so that something might inspire you.  You can choose one prompt, or none, or all of them. 
  • If you don’t want to post on the blog, but you’ve written, please send me your writing in an email.
  • Try to add a comment or two on other people’s blogposts!

 

 

 

Writing Prompt #1: You don’t have to choose the celebrities shown.  Choose your own: Nick Jonas? Kevin Hart? Rhianna? Who would you like to speak at our school?  Don’t forget to explain WHY that celebrity would be an excellent choice.


 

Writing Prompt #2: What fashion should be AGAINST THE LAW?  Don’t forget to TELL US WHY!

 

 

 

Writing Prompt #3: This one explains itself!

 

 

Writing Prompt #4: Tell this story!

 

 

I can’t wait to see what you write!

 

The Reveal: What was the real story?

The Reveal: What was the real story?

Last week, two of our writing prompts were from the news.  I got them from the NY Times Learning Network.  I thought that this week I’d give you a separate post to reveal the stories behind the images.

 

  1. Last week I posted this image from NY Times Learning Network

    UPDATED: FEB. 27, 2020

    This week’s image comes from the Sept. 21, 2010 “Pictures of the Day: The U.N. and Elsewhere” on The New York Times Lens blog. The original caption reads:

    Bangladeshi commuters walked across a floating boat bridge on the Buriganga River in Dhaka. Water hyacinth hampered the movement of boats on the river, so they were tied together to form a temporary bridge.

    Munir Uz Zaman is the photographer.

     

     

  2. And I posted this picture, which was from the NY Times Learning Network too!
    UPDATED: JAN. 9, 2020

    This week’s image comes from the Dec. 17, 2019 article “There Are No Children Here. Just Lots of Life-Size Dolls.” The original caption reads:

    A tourist making funny faces for a picture with the dolls in the community center.

    The article by Motoko Rich, with photographs by Nadia Shira Cohen, begins:

    The last children were born in the remote mountain village of Nagoro 18 years ago.

    Now, just over two dozen adults live in this outpost straddling a river on the Japanese island of Shikoku. The elementary school closed its doors in 2012, shortly after the last two students completed sixth grade.

    But on a recent bright autumn Sunday, Tsukimi Ayano brought the school back to life.

    It just so happened that she did it with dolls rather than humans.

    Ms. Ayano, 70, had arrayed more than 40 handmade dolls in a lifelike tableau on the grounds of the shuttered school. Recreating a school sports day known as “undokai,” a staple of the Japanese calendar, she had posed child-size dolls in a footrace, perched on a swing set and tossing balls.

    “We never see children here anymore,” said Ms. Ayano, who was born in Nagoro, and has staged an annual doll festival for the last seven years.

    Japan’s population is shrinking and aging, and nowhere is the trend felt more intensively than in its rural regions, where a low birthrate is exacerbated by dwindling employment opportunities and an inconvenient lifestyle.

    “There are no chances for young people here,” said Ms. Ayano, who remembers when the village had a medical clinic, a pachinko gambling parlor and a diner. Now, Nagoro does not have even one shop. “They can’t make a living.”

    Some 350 dolls made by Ms. Ayano and her friends outnumber the human residents by more than 10 to 1. All around Nagoro, she has staged the dolls — made of wood and wire frames, stuffed with newspapers and dressed in old clothes donated from across Japan — in various scenes evoking the real people who once populated the village.

Week Two – Writing Prompts

Week Two – Writing Prompts

Last week, lots of students in our English classes blogged and commented on each other’s blogs!  Yay!  Your writing was so entertaining and wonderful to read.  Thank you to all who blogged!

Writing is a great way to:

  • be creative
  • express our ideas
  • connect to others

 

This week I’m giving you a couple of EXTRA PROMPTS!  Don’t forget, you can blog about anything!  You don’t have to use any of the prompts, and you could use all of them!  You can write one blogpost or many!

If you chose to respond to Prompt #3 last week, I thought you might like to see the NYTimes article that actually went with this image.  Just click on the link below to see the article and the comments from readers who tried to guess like you did!

Prompt #3 – NYT article reveal!

(After clicking on the above link, you’ll need to scroll down quite a bit to see the reveal.)

 

Our prompts for this week!

Prompt #1: Use this photo to inspire a short story OR tell what you think is actually happening in this photo.

 

 

 

Prompt #2: Why ARE memes so popular?  By the way, if you’d like, you are welcome to create your own meme after you explain.

 

Prompt #3:  Turn this prompt into a story!

 

Writing Prompt #4: Tell the story!

 

Writing Prompt #5 – YOU CHOOSE YOUR MONSTERS!  What would they say to each other? 

 

Are there certain kinds of prompts that inspire you more than others?  Do you like the visual prompts?  Do you want some nonfiction prompts like the one last week on “Mentors?”   Let me know in the comments section of this blogpost!  

 

Week One – Writing Prompts!

Week One – Writing Prompts!

One of the things that I’d like for us all to do during this online school time is WRITE!

Just like reading, the more you write, the better you get at writing!  So, I’m going to provide you with 3 Writing prompts per week, and I would love it if EVERYONE could try to write at least once every week.  Your writing should be a paragraph or more in length.

If you do not feel inspired by the prompts, you are free to write on a topic of your choice, but try to write a little every week.  Even just a journal entry of what you’re reading or how you’re feeling would be great.  If you don’t want to put your writing on the blog, just write and send it to me via email.  If you can’t share your writing at all, just write for yourself.

If you choose one of these prompts, please put the image into your blogpost first and then write your blogpost.

How to put an image into your post:

  • Right click on the image
  • Select “Save Image As”
  • Save your image with a title you’ll remember
  • In your blog, put your cursor where you want the image
  • Click on the “Add Media” button that appears right under your blog title
  • Click on ‘upload file’ and find your file
  • After your image loads, look at the right hand side bar and scroll down
  • You will see the following:   

In the right hand corner, you can decide where the photo will go (left, center, right), how big the photo will be (thumbnail, medium, full size) and then click “Insert into Post.”

Now that you know how, here are the Prompts!

 

Prompt #1 :Write a short story based on this photograph.

 

Writing Prompt #2 

 

Writing Prompt #3 :  You  can  use  this  one  in   two  ways.  See   below!

  1. This is actually a photo taken from a news article in the New York Times.  Can you explain what you think is happening in this photo?  What’s your best guess?  I will post a link to the actual story next week.
  2. Write a fictional short story based on this photo.

 

Oh, and ONE MORE THING . . . I expect you to comment on each other’s writing.  Find 2 other students in your grade and comment on their blogposts.  Say something specific, like “I like the way you used . . . . ” or “You made me feel . . . . ”

I can’t wait to read your writing!

Reading Strategies #1: Starting Points – Recall, Record, Retain

Reading Strategies #1: Starting Points – Recall, Record, Retain

Below is a modified blogpost from 2017.  I am reusing it because my approach to teaching reading (and writing) revolves around the same strategies, the ones that work!  Although the content/materials we use changes, the focus of the lesson is the same.  This is the first in a series of blogposts on reading.

 

Over the years, I’ve encountered many students who read beautifully when asked to read out loud.  They rarely stumble over a word.  They read with good pacing and expression.  They are simply a delight to listen to, and they’re proud of their ability to read orally with grace and confidence.  Some of these students, however, cannot recall what they’ve read almost as soon as they’ve finished reading.

 

ORAL READER OR SILENT READER? DO WHAT WORKS FOR YOU

The first question I have for these students is whether they tend to recall the story or information better when they read silently or aloud.  Each person is different, and it’s OK, perfectly wonderful in fact, to figure out which is best for YOU.  If you tend to recall text information better when you read silently in your head, please please please – do that!  If you, on the other hand, remember the ideas you’ve read about better when you’ve read out loud, please, please, please DO THAT!  While it may not be possible to read out loud at all times, when you can read in a whisper (in class, for example) or read loudly (at home, for example).  Do what works best for you.

 

STRATEGIES TO IMPROVE RECALL

There are still some students who have poor recall of what they’ve read no matter how they read – silently or out loud.  Here are some strategies that might help you!

  1. Stop after every few paragraphs.  Ask yourself: What was that part all about?  What happened?
  2. Write some key ideas on a sticky note or a jot note in your journal.  If you’re reading nonfiction: What information was described? What was explained? If you’re reading fiction: What action occurred? What was the character thinking? doing? saying?  Was the setting described? What did the setting ‘look like’ in your mind?
  3. When reading FICTION, after each page, write ONE SENTENCE that sums up the page.  What was the most important thing?  If you had to write a title for that page – as if it was a book or movie or video game on its own, what would you call it?  After each chapter, write the most important events or ideas in that chapter.
  4. When reading NONFICTION, after each paragraph, write a jot note or sticky note with the key ideas of that paragraph.  Use the content vocabulary but paraphrase for vocabulary that is not content-specific.

 

WHY IT WORKS

Stopping to write, or rather KNOWING you’re going to stop to write can help a reader stay focussed on the information and ideas in the text.  When you know that in a few minutes you’re going to have to put something to paper, you’re more likely to stay focussed, to concentrate and to think about what you’re reading AS you are reading it.

I can hear some of you thinking, “OH NO!  Now, not only do I have to READ, but I have to WRITE while I read.  Double yuck!”  And it’ true.  This is not a strategy anyone wants to use forever, but the thing is, you won’t have to!  It’s something that you will use a lot at first, until focus and recall are not as big a problem for you.

 

ALL READERS NEED TO STOP, THINK, RECORD

I still use this sticky note strategy of writing what I ‘recall’ when reading more difficult text, and YES, text can be difficult for even the most accomplished readers.  Dense text that is full of challenging vocabulary (I like to use the analogy of the physics textbooks that gave me big, fat goosebumps in high school because I was so afraid of the content, so unsure of myself as a scientist), text that stuffs new facts and information into a few sentences like sardines in a can, text that tends to jump from one setting or time to another, one narrator to another, and text that may just be WEIRD because of the author’s voice or style.

 

PARAPHRASE MEANS: IN YOUR OWN WORDS

It’s important to remember that all sticky notes or notes in your journal should be in YOUR OWN WORDS! Try not to just copy off the page. Copying can be done rather mindlessly, without much attention paid to what’s being copied (I’ll bet that you could copy words in German, or Italian, or Portuguese without ever really knowing what they mean!). The whole point of this strategy is to add mindfulness to your reading, so putting ideas in your own words, or paraphrasing when you do sticky notes means that you MUST pay attention to what’s going on, you MUST understand, at least to some degree, the ideas in the text. Writing in your own words means you’ve processed the information, and now it belongs to YOU!

In order to illustrate the strategy for you, I’ll use a text we used in Grade 8 nonfiction recently called “All the Cells in the Human Body” from Thoughtco.com (adapted by Newsela 10.23.17).

Here’s the text we were reading.  We read each paragraph slowly, stopping to think after each paragraph.  In this exercise, we wanted to record the ideas that were most important to us from each paragraph, and our purpose for reading was to understand the function and form of each kind of cell we read about.

In the coming weeks, we will be using these strategies in both 7th and 8th grade to improve our understanding of nonfiction texts and to prepare ourselves for a research project that will involve reading, note taking, and writing.

Class News

Class News

This fall has been a busy one!  To update you on everything we’ve done so far would take a while, so I’ll just mention the big ideas we’ve been working on.  The BIGGEST news is that we all have finished designing or updating our blogs, and we’ve posted our writing on them, so please take a moment to check them out!  I hope that parents feel free to comment on their child’s blog.  Everyone LOVES the encouragement that comes with a positive comment on our writing.  Writing is hard, and we can all use a boost!

Also . . . .

In Grade 8 we’ve worked on:

  • Quickwrites – We’ve done several to get the ideas flowing and ready for our more formal assignment on Memoir.
  • Memoir – We read lots of memoirs (some of which you’ll find on the One Note for Grade 8), analyzed the form and wrote our own. They are ON THE BLOG!  Please feel free to read and comment on them!

  • Vocabulary – lots of prefixes and more to come . . .
  • Punctuation – Quotation Marks!  Test on Tuesday!
  • Independent Reading – We are all reading our own novels.
  • Elements of a Narrative – So far we’ve discussed and studied character, conflict, plot, and theme.  We’ve written about character, conflict, and now in the process of writing about theme in the context of a short story.

In Grade 7 we’ve worked on:

  • Independent Reading – Getting into the reading habit by reading in class and at home every day has been a focus for us.  I’m proud of the work students have done to get into the reading groove.
  • Short story study – We’ve read “Seventh Grade” by Gary Soto, “Thank You Ma’am” by Langston Hughes, and “Charles” by Shirley Jackson.  Through these short stories and our own novels, we’ve been studying the elements of a narrative.
  • Elements of a narrative – We’ve discussed and written about character traits, and we’ve touched on conflict and themes in our discussions.
  • Vocabulary – lots of prefixes and more to come . . .
  • Media studies – We designed our blogs!  Take a look at the way in which we’ve made our blogs unique and expressed our personalities through our designs!
  • Quickwrites and developing our ideas – We did several quickwrites and we developed the one we did on “My Favourite Place” to put on the blogs.  Please feel free to read our blogs and leave a comment!
  • Grammar – We worked on identifying the subject and predicate (main ingredients) of a sentence.  Now we’re working on Coordinating Conjunctions: FANBOYS! Our test is on Thursday!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And what’s coming up?  Novel studies in small and large groups will begin this week in both grades!  In grade 8 we’ll be reading The Outsiders by S.E. Hinton, and some of us will read Rules by Cynthia Lord. Reading a novel as a group means there will be daily reading homework with specified page numbers.  Work the following day may include chapter tests, discussions, and other activities, so it will be important that all students keep up with the reading homework.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

We’ll continue our work on vocabulary and punctuation (dashes, parentheses, ellipses and more coming up).  We will be writing short stories and newspaper articles!

In Grade 7 we will be reading several novels as large groups.  In Grade 7B, we will be reading Touching Spirit Bear by Ben Mikaelson.  In 7A students will either be reading Freak the Mighty by Rodman Philbrick or Shipwreck by Gordon Korman. Reading a novel as a group means there will be daily reading homework with specified page numbers.  Work the following day may include chapter tests, discussions, and other activities, so it will be important that all students keep up with the reading homework.

We are in the process of writing “Where I’m From” poems (check out the original by George Ella Lyons and mine here).  We studied the original and developed our own based on the poet’s style of ‘showing’ rather than ‘telling’.  They should be on the blogs in a week or so and they are going to KNOCK YOUR SOCKS OFF!  Be on the lookout!  We will also continue our study of prefixes in vocabulary and in grammar, subordinating conjunctions are up next!

If you’re not convinced that punctuation matters, you should consider this.

 

 

 

Questions and comments are welcomed!  Thank you for reading!

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